1. Zack Katz on September 5, 2022 at 2:02 pm

    The stop motion was really cool! Well done!

  2. Yadira Barajas on September 5, 2022 at 2:14 pm

    Very well done, my only suggestion would be to increase the volume when Steve does his voiceover, it’s kind of hard to hear what he’s saying sometimes.

  3. Rachel Liu on September 5, 2022 at 2:23 pm

    I like the animation but it is really dark. Can you adjust the brightness/ contrast?  Great script and facts, voiceover could be clearer after 1 minute.

  4. LWHSbiology on September 5, 2022 at 2:26 pm

    The music is super fun. Lots of good information. Love how you added details about the current population trend perhaps rising. Any place in there for an image of the data with a graph? Is there any other adjustment you could make to the lighting in the stop motion. It is so great, but some of it gets lost.

  5. Evan Isackson on September 5, 2022 at 2:30 pm

    I really enjoyed the stop motion and the music, but I also want to see what the animation could look like with better lighting.

  6. Fernanda Gonzalez on September 5, 2022 at 2:32 pm

    I feel like the stop monition could be improved. Maybe Imovie could make it a little more stable. Also some parts are cuts off and that makes it hard to read. 

  7. Amy Dean on September 5, 2022 at 2:33 pm

    The animation at the beginning was really cool, guys. I love it. Your narration was good and you were very clear in the communication of your message. Excellent job.

  8. zak segura on September 5, 2022 at 2:41 pm

    the animation/drawings were cool. I agree with Yadira the voiceover is kinda hard to hear. Cool video!

  9. Mickey Almira on September 5, 2022 at 2:43 pm

    I thought this was soooo great!! I also agree with maybe tweaking Steves voice over so that it matches with Akilah’s. Otherwise i loved it very mucho 🙂

  10. Michele Gee on September 5, 2022 at 2:44 pm

    I liked the idea the animation, one thing I would change would be the sound of steves voiceover. Other than that I really liked the background music and there was a good amount of facts. 

  11. Elias Magaña on September 5, 2022 at 2:46 pm

    Fun music and drawings, voiceovers are fun and the script is informative and engaging. Maybe the voiceovers could be a little clearer but I think that may have just been the mic’s fault idk.

  12. Amanda Landaverde on September 5, 2022 at 2:46 pm

    The animation could be a little less washed out, but it is very well done and portrays your extensive effort in making this film. Some graphs would be nice.

  13. Diana Chavez on September 5, 2022 at 2:51 pm

    The script was really good and the stop motion added some fun to it which I loved!

  14. sabrina larsen on September 5, 2022 at 2:53 pm

    I really like the music and the transitions. 

  15. Chloe Chan on September 5, 2022 at 2:54 pm

    You guys did a great job of explaining the importance of mole crabs, and the stop motion was great!

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